Dicmatized: Sexcapades Volume 1: The Doctor Is In!
Author: Dysphagia Blount
Published: June 2012
Publisher: Gemini Phoenix Publishing Co.
ISBN-10: 0615652697
ISBN-13: 978-0615652696
ASIN: B003JMELPG (Kindle)
Rating: 2 Stars
Dr. Lenese Stringfield brings a bold and provocative edge to sex therapy with her innovative techniques, captivating clients with her seductive presence. Having loved and lost, Lenese believes in loving the one she's with if she can't be with the one she loves. However, her approach to amazing sex comes with a price. Life soon teaches this daring therapist that karma has a way of catching up. Getting involved with another woman's husband is risky, but falling in love with one can be fatal.
A book’s cover and back jacket description often determine whether a reader will invest time in it. Dyphia’s description (above) effectively entices potential readers, encouraging them to settle in for an intriguing read. Unfortunately, the engaging description doesn’t carry through the entire novel. As I read, I found myself torn between continuing and setting the book aside.
It’s evident that the author did not take her craft seriously, resulting in a poorly edited story with numerous missed opportunities for grammatical and formatting improvements. With professional editing and a more focused plot, this story could become a contender. The author would benefit from coaching and understanding that juggling multiple storylines can detract from the main plot.
I might have enjoyed this story more if I hadn’t been distracted by the need to mentally edit and clarify whether the text was dialogue or internal thought.
With a heavy heart and out of respect for the literary world, I cannot recommend this novel in its current state. (Reviewed by SCBookGal843)
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